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Post by surforst on Jan 8, 2006 2:05:27 GMT -5
Surforst required sick day story. I figure every fanfiction writter got to do it at least once. The law or something. Anyway hope you enjoy. www.fanfiction.net/s/2742622/1/Summary: The common cold is the bane of humanity and now it has struck our good friend Ron Stoppable. Now it's up to Kim to save our poor friend life. The horror! By the way now 40% more SSS appearances. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Jan 8, 2006 18:24:59 GMT -5
Left you a reply on fanfic, I liked it. Hm, I should probably get on with a sick day esk story. Interesting.  |
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Post by aridblue on Jan 9, 2006 12:32:49 GMT -5
Hmm, nice. A pre-StD and pre-ES kiss by Kim. Though I couldn't help but think that Ron is a little out of character... must be the cold getting to him, huh. ;D
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Post by aliciamartin on Jan 9, 2006 14:41:33 GMT -5
nice story good job and i like title lol ;D  |
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Post by surforst on Jan 9, 2006 19:22:59 GMT -5
Hmm, nice. A pre-StD and pre-ES kiss by Kim. Though I couldn't help but think that Ron is a little out of character... must be the cold getting to him, huh. ;D Out of character? How so? Just so I can avoid it in the future after all I thought he was in character considering what he had. Always good to have constructive input. Anyway glad you guys enjoyed it. ;D |
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Post by Undiscovered908 on Jan 9, 2006 21:25:48 GMT -5
AWWWW how cute!! that was really good!! I really really enjoyed it.
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Post by aliciamartin on Jan 10, 2006 16:21:10 GMT -5
hope theres a next chapter
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Post by Cid on Jan 10, 2006 17:50:08 GMT -5
i found it good
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Post by surforst on Jan 10, 2006 22:34:33 GMT -5
hope theres a next chapter Another chapter!  Honestly though I didn't think this had the potential for another chapter. Can anyone clarify on what they'd like to see in the next chapter and I might consider changing that. As it is I've got nothing. Well maybe I could write about the time Ron had to disarm a Nuke when Kim was stuck in the hospital with a broken arm and how she though he died in the attempt. Though who wants to read about that ;D |
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Post by aridblue on Jan 11, 2006 7:42:52 GMT -5
Hmm, nice. A pre-StD and pre-ES kiss by Kim. Though I couldn't help but think that Ron is a little out of character... must be the cold getting to him, huh. ;D Out of character? How so? Just so I can avoid it in the future after all I thought he was in character considering what he had. Always good to have constructive input. Anyway glad you guys enjoyed it. ;D Oh crap, this reminds me of lit class, when I bring up a point but could not bring up evidence to substantiate it. I would make a bad lawyer, heheh. Sorry. |
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