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Post by surforst on Jan 27, 2006 3:17:57 GMT -5
New short story ;D www.fanfiction.net/s/2772147/1/Summary: Surforst goes with yet another trend. Anyway Kim and Ron alone on a cargo plane with a pilot paid tweenty bucks to look forward. What will they do? Play checkers of course. Right? Quotes I liked: "All she knew is if he picked it up from another girl she’d have some killing to do. Not permanent just a little maiming." "If she had known he was this skilled she would have had him better occupied on more then one mission return. Heck she could of used him on a few study nights too." Enjoy ;D |
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Jan 27, 2006 18:13:25 GMT -5
I loved it! I absolutely loved. I loved seeing Kim in like a karate esqe class. I've always wondered if she took karate classes. I loved that guy Mike in the fic. This is so much fun: "Alright Kim I’ll answer the question. If you want to know how many guys want to take you out on a date there actually a lot? Who wouldn’t want to say they got some action from Kim Possible after all. That’s not the issue here is it though?" If I was a guy, I would love to get some from KP. Shoot, even as a female, I'd want to get some from KP too. LOL. Wonderful fic.  |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Jan 27, 2006 19:25:28 GMT -5
BRILLIANT!
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Post by surforst on Jan 28, 2006 1:30:09 GMT -5
I loved it! I absolutely loved. I loved seeing Kim in like a karate esqe class. I've always wondered if she took karate classes. I loved that guy Mike in the fic. This is so much fun: "Alright Kim I’ll answer the question. If you want to know how many guys want to take you out on a date there actually a lot? Who wouldn’t want to say they got some action from Kim Possible after all. That’s not the issue here is it though?" If I was a guy, I would love to get some from KP. Shoot, even as a female, I'd want to get some from KP too. LOL. Wonderful fic.  Glad you liked it and glad you liked Mike. Now Mike is an interesting character I plan to work on. His help in Kim practice is actually more mental since she can always beat him down. Trust me Mike not suppose to be some uber character though he does have multiple militaries trying to recruit him. After all he's written and published books on tactics and historical battles. Good old Mike ;D |
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Post by ultimatenacotoppin on Jan 28, 2006 11:06:37 GMT -5
Bump. Oh, and good story. Heh, Kim can't help herself from overthinking can she?
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Jan 29, 2006 16:09:31 GMT -5
I think I like Mike.
Haha! I rhymed.
*pretends to beatbox*
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Post by surforst on Jan 31, 2006 2:31:03 GMT -5
Bump. Oh, and good story. Heh, Kim can't help herself from overthinking can she? Pretty much her problem in a series of one shots. If she would just grab the guy and lay claim already all would be solved. Instead she takes her frustration out on poor Mike with a weekly beating session. He could show you some of the bruises, scars, and scans of broken bones from some of the more vicious sparing matches. Poor Mike. ;D  Um...yeah I hope you all like Mike. He's my first attempt at creating a OC character meant to go from story to story. His original intent was to be a guiding character/friend for Josh. Kind of fill Josh out a bit while giving someone to push Kim and Ron in the right direction. Now he's got a personality to boot. Hope I give him justice because I personally like the guy. Well thanks for the kind words. |
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Jan 31, 2006 9:12:27 GMT -5
He kind of reminds me of my fanfiction stories with the character of "Ashley Possible Benlove," except she's like Kim's younger cousin by two months and will tend to incredibly annoying. But she's a good character. Hence the "Ben" prefix in her last name. |
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Post by cilghal16 on Jan 31, 2006 11:27:50 GMT -5
nice story
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Post by Mr. Dubois a.k.a IvyMae on Feb 6, 2006 12:44:32 GMT -5
I really like your character of Mike, he seems really cool |
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Post by surforst on Feb 6, 2006 15:56:35 GMT -5
I really like your character of Mike, he seems really cool Thanks. Glad people like him so far. That means he gets to reappear again. Anyway I'm grateful to all the kind reviews and hope you guys will enjoy further story releases. |
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Feb 6, 2006 16:50:38 GMT -5
Of course we will. |
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