Post by will85 on Feb 18, 2006 2:24:43 GMT -5
First of all, I am not taking credit for all of this, some of this comes from That' So Raven. I'm just redoing my version of it and I won't take all the credit.
UPGRADE August 24, 2015: I plan to rewrite this fanfic as well as this one ronstoppable.proboards.com/thread/7443/first-fanfic-on-site on fanfiction.net And I'm planning to get rid of much of what was written in this fic in my new version and I am planning to add a few more things I thought of to try to make this story better.
Stroy:
It's just another day in the peaceful, well not so peaceful, Middleton, USA. I wonder if the Tri City area has a Rapid Transit system or a commuter rail or light rail system. Oh well anyway, Mr and Mrs Possible left to go to work. Kim is at home with me. She is talking on her Kimmunicator with Wade. It seems Dr. Drakken and Shego are at it again!
"William," says Kim turning to me, "Can you watch the tweebs, I have to go save the world again"
"No problem," I say with a thumbs up."
Kim sets out on her mission and takes Ron with her of course. I by the way am up to something. After she leaves I go downstairs to my room and do a little reconstructing. I am installing something but I won't tell you until later in the story what it is. I can tell you it stores up the allowence I've been saving!
Next I go upstairs and I sneak around the corner at Jim and Tim, whom are not are of my presence. Then I grab my cell phone and pretend to talk on it. JIm and Tim by the way are in the livingroom infront of the TV. But this is what I say on the cell phone:
"Yep I did it. I have a whole lot of money stashed my room. Yep that's right, lots and lots of money! A whole lot of green."
Jim and Tim are eavsdropping on my fake conversation.
"Oh yeah," I say, "And guess what, my money is not even protected. Crazy huh? Well nobody quite knows where my money is hiding, but let me you in on a little secret..."
Jim and Tim get really excited, Tim even druels!
"It is hiding inside this bank-like thing I have installed in my room. In order to get it, you have to type your name and then you have to type a password. The password anybody can click is my birthday. Yep, but only you and I know about it and I hope the twins don't know about this!"
"Did you hear that?" says Tim.
"William has a lot of money hiding in his room," says Jim.
"And it's about to be all ours!" says Tim.
"Hicka Bicka Boo" says Jim
"Hoosha!" says Tim.
Then they race passed me saying "Hey William, thanks for telling us where your money is, we hope you enjoyed having it while you still did." They both laugh.
"Oh no," I say fakely, "Jim and Tim overheard our conversation!"
Jim and Tim run down to my room, turn on my light and find something that looks like an ATM machine. Jim is the one typing, and he types my name and then types the password.
"That money is as good as ours!" says Jim. But then something else happens.
The lights turn off, and decibals go off and red strobe lights role around like on an emergancy vehicle. Then my voice is sounded through a loud speaker going "Security Alert, Security Alert, Security Alert, yo yo yo yo bring security in my roo roo roo room, attention sir, yo bring security in my room, yo bring securiy in my roo roo room..." it goes on and on, does back to "Security Alert" and all that. As that happens, my face appears on the TV screen just like Kyle Massey's character does. And instead of a net falling, a cage drops on to Jim and Tim and traps them in and the floor of the cage comes out of the floor of my room and connects to the cage and then the cage lifts them both up. The eagles have landed! The decibals are still going and my voice is still going. Plus, the cage rocks around and back and forth moving Jim and Tim from side to side causing them to bump into each other constantley and nearly making them dissey. Tim almost barfs on Jim!
I hear it from the ground floor of the house and run down the stairs and when I go into my room, I find Jim and Tim hanging inside my burgler trap. I turn off the loud sound and my light turns on. I laugh at both them and laugh harder and harder. I laugh so hard I cannot even stand up! "Gottcha suckers!"
Tim goes, "You do realize once we get out of here..."
Jim goes, "...We are going to kill you..."
"...We are going to kick your butt..." says Tim
"...And we are gonna mess up your face!" Jim Finishes.
"Oh," I say, "If that's your attitude, then I guess you guys can just in there until you die."
"You know eventually," says Jim, "You are gonna have to get us out of here!"
"Yeah" says Tim, "You can't leave us hanging here forever, mom will find out and you will be in trouble."
"Okay okay!" I say, "I'll get you guys out!" So I went over to my drawer, got my key out and then went over to them to unlock the cage. Aware that I was really in for it, I prepare to high tail it after I'm done freeing them. When the cage is unlocked, I race out of the basement before the net hits the floor and Jim and Tim get out. I head for the front door.
Kim and Ron and Rufus open the door to walk in, but I push them out of the way saying "Excuse me!" I run for my life down the street as fast as I can.
Then Jim and Tim race out the door too.
"Get back here William!" says Jim and Tim. They are chasing me down the street.
Believe it or not, they chase me all over the Tri City Area, east side, west side, all around the towns! And surprisingly, we never wear out.
Later that evening before the sunsets, Mr and Mrs. Possible are back in the house. Kim and Ron and Rufus are still there.
"Wonder where William and the twins are?" says Mr. Possible.
"They ran out somewhere," says Kim, "William raced out the door and Jim and Tim ran after him. I think he did something to make them mad."
Just then, I open the backdoor enter and immediatley shut it as I'm panting.
"What are you doing all out of breath," says Mrs Possible, and where the boys?"
"Lets, *pant pant*, just, *gasp wheeze*say, *gasp pant* that those Ying Yang twins are after me but don't have a clue where I am."
"THen The back door opens and Jim and Tim enter. They spring on me, knock me down on my stomach and are on top of me, but then roll me around like they did each other in that Soccer Ball episode. Then they are on top of me and we are not rolling.
"So Will," says Tim.
"Did you think you could..." says Jim
"...Get away with tricking us into thinking you had money in your room...?" says Tim
"...And think you that you could hide from us?" says Jim.
I smile with a mad look on my face. Then I show my teeth.
"Uh guys," I say, "Mr and MrsPossible are watching us right about now!"
JIm and TIm look to their lefts and see that Mr. and Mrs. Possible are watching us! Then they get off of me.
"Alright, start talking," says Mrs. Possible, "What goes on here?"
"Alright," I say, "I tricked Jim and Tim into thinking I had lots of money and I lured them down to my room by having a fake conversation on my cell phone and then I trap them in a cage I installed in my room. I did let them free though, it was a childish prank. But hey, now i can really use it incase any real thieves try to steal my long saved allowence."
Everybody laughs, except me Jim and Tim! Well, then we laugh too.
"Alright who wants dinner?" says Mrs. Possible.
And this concludes my story on This thread. Be sure to check out the story titled "My First Fanfic on this site". It too has Jim and Tim in it.
The End
UPGRADE August 24, 2015: I plan to rewrite this fanfic as well as this one ronstoppable.proboards.com/thread/7443/first-fanfic-on-site on fanfiction.net And I'm planning to get rid of much of what was written in this fic in my new version and I am planning to add a few more things I thought of to try to make this story better.
Stroy:
It's just another day in the peaceful, well not so peaceful, Middleton, USA. I wonder if the Tri City area has a Rapid Transit system or a commuter rail or light rail system. Oh well anyway, Mr and Mrs Possible left to go to work. Kim is at home with me. She is talking on her Kimmunicator with Wade. It seems Dr. Drakken and Shego are at it again!
"William," says Kim turning to me, "Can you watch the tweebs, I have to go save the world again"
"No problem," I say with a thumbs up."
Kim sets out on her mission and takes Ron with her of course. I by the way am up to something. After she leaves I go downstairs to my room and do a little reconstructing. I am installing something but I won't tell you until later in the story what it is. I can tell you it stores up the allowence I've been saving!
Next I go upstairs and I sneak around the corner at Jim and Tim, whom are not are of my presence. Then I grab my cell phone and pretend to talk on it. JIm and Tim by the way are in the livingroom infront of the TV. But this is what I say on the cell phone:
"Yep I did it. I have a whole lot of money stashed my room. Yep that's right, lots and lots of money! A whole lot of green."
Jim and Tim are eavsdropping on my fake conversation.
"Oh yeah," I say, "And guess what, my money is not even protected. Crazy huh? Well nobody quite knows where my money is hiding, but let me you in on a little secret..."
Jim and Tim get really excited, Tim even druels!
"It is hiding inside this bank-like thing I have installed in my room. In order to get it, you have to type your name and then you have to type a password. The password anybody can click is my birthday. Yep, but only you and I know about it and I hope the twins don't know about this!"
"Did you hear that?" says Tim.
"William has a lot of money hiding in his room," says Jim.
"And it's about to be all ours!" says Tim.
"Hicka Bicka Boo" says Jim
"Hoosha!" says Tim.
Then they race passed me saying "Hey William, thanks for telling us where your money is, we hope you enjoyed having it while you still did." They both laugh.
"Oh no," I say fakely, "Jim and Tim overheard our conversation!"
Jim and Tim run down to my room, turn on my light and find something that looks like an ATM machine. Jim is the one typing, and he types my name and then types the password.
"That money is as good as ours!" says Jim. But then something else happens.
The lights turn off, and decibals go off and red strobe lights role around like on an emergancy vehicle. Then my voice is sounded through a loud speaker going "Security Alert, Security Alert, Security Alert, yo yo yo yo bring security in my roo roo roo room, attention sir, yo bring security in my room, yo bring securiy in my roo roo room..." it goes on and on, does back to "Security Alert" and all that. As that happens, my face appears on the TV screen just like Kyle Massey's character does. And instead of a net falling, a cage drops on to Jim and Tim and traps them in and the floor of the cage comes out of the floor of my room and connects to the cage and then the cage lifts them both up. The eagles have landed! The decibals are still going and my voice is still going. Plus, the cage rocks around and back and forth moving Jim and Tim from side to side causing them to bump into each other constantley and nearly making them dissey. Tim almost barfs on Jim!
I hear it from the ground floor of the house and run down the stairs and when I go into my room, I find Jim and Tim hanging inside my burgler trap. I turn off the loud sound and my light turns on. I laugh at both them and laugh harder and harder. I laugh so hard I cannot even stand up! "Gottcha suckers!"
Tim goes, "You do realize once we get out of here..."
Jim goes, "...We are going to kill you..."
"...We are going to kick your butt..." says Tim
"...And we are gonna mess up your face!" Jim Finishes.
"Oh," I say, "If that's your attitude, then I guess you guys can just in there until you die."
"You know eventually," says Jim, "You are gonna have to get us out of here!"
"Yeah" says Tim, "You can't leave us hanging here forever, mom will find out and you will be in trouble."
"Okay okay!" I say, "I'll get you guys out!" So I went over to my drawer, got my key out and then went over to them to unlock the cage. Aware that I was really in for it, I prepare to high tail it after I'm done freeing them. When the cage is unlocked, I race out of the basement before the net hits the floor and Jim and Tim get out. I head for the front door.
Kim and Ron and Rufus open the door to walk in, but I push them out of the way saying "Excuse me!" I run for my life down the street as fast as I can.
Then Jim and Tim race out the door too.
"Get back here William!" says Jim and Tim. They are chasing me down the street.
Believe it or not, they chase me all over the Tri City Area, east side, west side, all around the towns! And surprisingly, we never wear out.
Later that evening before the sunsets, Mr and Mrs. Possible are back in the house. Kim and Ron and Rufus are still there.
"Wonder where William and the twins are?" says Mr. Possible.
"They ran out somewhere," says Kim, "William raced out the door and Jim and Tim ran after him. I think he did something to make them mad."
Just then, I open the backdoor enter and immediatley shut it as I'm panting.
"What are you doing all out of breath," says Mrs Possible, and where the boys?"
"Lets, *pant pant*, just, *gasp wheeze*say, *gasp pant* that those Ying Yang twins are after me but don't have a clue where I am."
"THen The back door opens and Jim and Tim enter. They spring on me, knock me down on my stomach and are on top of me, but then roll me around like they did each other in that Soccer Ball episode. Then they are on top of me and we are not rolling.
"So Will," says Tim.
"Did you think you could..." says Jim
"...Get away with tricking us into thinking you had money in your room...?" says Tim
"...And think you that you could hide from us?" says Jim.
I smile with a mad look on my face. Then I show my teeth.
"Uh guys," I say, "Mr and MrsPossible are watching us right about now!"
JIm and TIm look to their lefts and see that Mr. and Mrs. Possible are watching us! Then they get off of me.
"Alright, start talking," says Mrs. Possible, "What goes on here?"
"Alright," I say, "I tricked Jim and Tim into thinking I had lots of money and I lured them down to my room by having a fake conversation on my cell phone and then I trap them in a cage I installed in my room. I did let them free though, it was a childish prank. But hey, now i can really use it incase any real thieves try to steal my long saved allowence."
Everybody laughs, except me Jim and Tim! Well, then we laugh too.
"Alright who wants dinner?" says Mrs. Possible.
And this concludes my story on This thread. Be sure to check out the story titled "My First Fanfic on this site". It too has Jim and Tim in it.
The End
