Everlasting Love: A New Chapter

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No, this isn't a new chapter to my ongoing trilogy (sorry, but it will be done shortly, trust me ), but a oneshot that I made for a contest over on the DA called "Spring Wedding".

It takes place in the Everlasting Love universe, and I think it does some justice to Kim and Ron's wedding, being that I never took the time to write out a chapter dedicated to the ceremony.

Although it ends up being one of the shortest pieces I've ever written, it turned out better than I first expected.

Spring Wedding

I hope you guys like it.

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I like both version Everlasting Love & Everlasting Love II: Vengeance , but it was kind of confusing between seeing both versions.

I didn't like that Rufus, Ron's naked Molerat died and they didn't instead even if he had died had some ospring so Rufus 2+ might have been around still at least in Kim and Ron Stoppable's adventures.

As two killing off Drakken and "I forget did they kill Shego? Drakken should have gotten away as he's one that we always looked foward to his plans and being foiled by Kim Possible.
Keep posting these stories Dude

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Thanks for the comments.

I would agree that killing off Rufus might have been a little harsh, but it's definitely a part of life that everyone must go through with their pet. At some point in a person's life, they must realize that death is a part of life. That's what I tried to incorporate into the story, making it with real world situations that most people can relate to.

I'll admit that when I first started writing the original Everlasting Love, I had basically no idea where I was going to go with it. At that point, I completely forgot to put Rufus in at all. I came to realize that there has to be a good reason in the sequel for no appearance in it whatsoever. I could have just put it as he was sleeping or something, but it seemed a little too cliched and wouldn't add much realism.

So I thought, "Maybe I should have Rufus die a natural death, after all, Ron's had him since junior high. He'd be starting to show age soon." At least, that's how I thought it should be handled. Not to worry, even though he died, he'll still make an appearance in the third part.

Killing off Drakken seemed like the thing to do at the time. Sure, he could have gotten away, but I wouldn't have any closure when I complete the entire story arc, there's still more left to explore in this world I created. In a sense, the real Drakken was already dead, being taken over by his inner evil, which is explained in chapter three of "Vengeance". He too, will make an appearance yet in this next story, but not as you might expect to see him as.