Considering Continuing [sorry I messed up]

[Ravie Byrd]

Hello, it's been a while since I've been here '

Anyway, for a long while I had gotten un-interested in KP (sad, I know) because as far as I knew, the show was cancelled. But, now that they're making a fourth season, I've been getting back into it. It took me until now to get here, but here I am.

Now, I have a fanfic that I was working on a looooong time ago. I'm considering continuing the fic, but only if it's good enough to make poeple want to continue reading. If it's not, I'll prolly just start another one all together. See, my writing has drastically improved since I last updated and even more since I started the fic.

Here's the link to the fic. Please read it and tell me what you think I should do:
www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=2032623&chapter=1

[Pim Peccable]

Unfortunately, Ravie posted a "secure preview" link that only she, the fic's author, can actually use.
Here is a link the rest of us can use
www.fanfiction.net/s/2032623/1/

I highly recommend her site, too!
www.clubshego.com/
You never know when a certain actress might show up

[Ravie Byrd]

Oh ^^' That would be my bad xDD I'm blonde, gimme a break

*blinks* Wait, how'd you know about that? She told me to keep it secret... and I did... did she tell you?

[Pim Peccable]

Just finished reading it.
I think it's worth working with.

If your style has improved (and it is likely over nearly a year), you should think about proofreading and rewriting what you have already and then continuing from there.

The major plot points are good.
It needs more cleanup than anything.

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I didn't tell any secrets that I know of.

If you mean the actress, her posts are visible ... and we have chatted.

[Ravie Byrd]

okay cool. I'll prolly just do that.

Yeh, but did she say who she was?

[Pim Peccable]

Frankly, I didn't doubt for long.
She uses her real name, etc. on her profile.

She was kind enough to chat with me a couple of minutes. She also commented that recording wasn't finished on her new season yet (at the time).