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Post by destinyinevitable on May 28, 2007 12:51:23 GMT -5
These are amazing! You're a very talented artist!
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Post by Slyrr on Jun 5, 2007 22:16:44 GMT -5
Chapter 3 is now online! Illustrated version: home.comcast.net/~gregfisk/fatigable3.htmFanfiction link: www.fanfiction.net/s/3546553/3/Nine years old - Rhonda meets the mascot of Kamp Kwitcherbeliakin: Gentle Paw. As you can see, she was really really thrilled to meet him... Fast forward eight years. Rhonda is back at Kwitcherbeliakin, and she's not the only one who's grown up a little. Quoth Rhonda: "What is with that stupid bear? Can't he sleep unless he's got me terrified in the same room?"Learn why the camp counsellors thought her Indian name should be 'Firebringer'.... Angst - 2.0. It was the worst summer of Rhonda's life, and even now, she has trouble dealing with it.... Enjoy the art, and post reviews for the story itself at fanfiction.net....
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Post by nabusan on Jun 6, 2007 5:51:29 GMT -5
OMG, this pic is to DIE for. Your pictures are so emotive! I love it! And atleast that bear didn't go crazy like the monkey mascot from Camp Wannaweep ^^
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Post by brendank on Jun 6, 2007 12:13:06 GMT -5
OMG, this pic is to DIE for. Your pictures are so emotive! I love it! And atleast that bear didn't go crazy like the monkey mascot from Camp Wannaweep ^^ Hey, Team Probable is as much about inverting the Team Possibles as reflecting them. So it's fairly reasonable for Camp Kwitherbeliakin to be an overall benevolent place that Rhonda just can't handle, as opposed to the sheer hostility of Camp Wannaweep to Ron. Plus going by patterns, the Camp seems to be like an analog to Yamanuchi as well. Which makes me wonder if Grim will soon be Jelling about Jerry, One of Cheif Sakituya's students.
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Post by Luke Danger on Jun 6, 2007 18:08:37 GMT -5
OMG, this pic is to DIE for. Your pictures are so emotive! I love it! And atleast that bear didn't go crazy like the monkey mascot from Camp Wannaweep ^^ Hey, Team Probable is as much about inverting the Team Possibles as reflecting them. So it's fairly reasonable for Camp Kwitherbeliakin to be an overall benevolent place that Rhonda just can't handle, as opposed to the sheer hostility of Camp Wannaweep to Ron. Plus going by patterns, the Camp seems to be like an analog to Yamanuchi as well. Which makes me wonder if Grim will soon be Jelling about Jerry, One of Cheif Sakituya's students. I still hope that Kim and Ron at one point finish them off...
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Post by Slyrr on Jun 6, 2007 19:30:50 GMT -5
Ouch. Still, if you didn't hate them, they wouldn't be bad guys.
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Post by trombe on Jun 6, 2007 19:47:06 GMT -5
Hey, Team Probable is as much about inverting the Team Possibles as reflecting them. So it's fairly reasonable for Camp Kwitherbeliakin to be an overall benevolent place that Rhonda just can't handle, as opposed to the sheer hostility of Camp Wannaweep to Ron. Plus going by patterns, the Camp seems to be like an analog to Yamanuchi as well. Which makes me wonder if Grim will soon be Jelling about Jerry, One of Cheif Sakituya's students. I still hope that Kim and Ron at one point finish them off... *sigh* I feel my teachings of understanding fail to reach young Danger. Failed, I have. Blind, is he to the greater things in the Force. Balance must be maintained. Anyway. Another awesome chapter Slyrr.
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Post by Thorius Maximus on Jun 6, 2007 19:52:44 GMT -5
Ouch. Still, if you didn't hate them, they wouldn't be bad guys. Yet the "bad guys" you have created are much more complex emotionally (to the level of a main character), they aren't one side minded, and as such this oddly makes the situation purely a matter of perspective. Each team has their own perspective. While team Probable's perspective may not be the most appropriate, it is not devoid of compreention, thanks to the insight view of things it was shown. Even without the insight, their personalities were complex enough to completely avoid imediate steriotyping in the first story.
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Post by Luke Danger on Jun 6, 2007 20:05:04 GMT -5
I still hope that Kim and Ron at one point finish them off... *sigh* I feel my teachings of understanding fail to reach young Danger. Failed, I have. Blind, is he to the greater things in the Force. Balance must be maintained. Anyway. Another awesome chapter Slyrr. LOL nice Yoda refrence dude, but really, the villians are going to wind up finished of at some point, namely, when they get the US Military's atntion... (Bombers anyone?)
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Post by trombe on Jun 6, 2007 20:06:43 GMT -5
*sigh* I feel my teachings of understanding fail to reach young Danger. Failed, I have. Blind, is he to the greater things in the Force. Balance must be maintained. Anyway. Another awesome chapter Slyrr. LOL nice Yoda refrence dude, but really, the villians are going to wind up finished of at some point, namely, when they get the US Military's atntion... (Bombers anyone?) Team Probable seems to be too smart for that. besides Good cannot exist without its counterpart.
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Post by Luke Danger on Jun 6, 2007 20:08:16 GMT -5
At least, without its counter part at ANY part of the universe....
And I ment the villians in general
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Post by nabusan on Jun 6, 2007 20:08:27 GMT -5
Hey, Team Probable is as much about inverting the Team Possibles as reflecting them. So it's fairly reasonable for Camp Kwitherbeliakin to be an overall benevolent place that Rhonda just can't handle, as opposed to the sheer hostility of Camp Wannaweep to Ron. Plus going by patterns, the Camp seems to be like an analog to Yamanuchi as well. Which makes me wonder if Grim will soon be Jelling about Jerry, One of Cheif Sakituya's students. I still hope that Kim and Ron at one point finish them off... I'm guessin' you're a shoot now, ask questions later kinda person?
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Post by Luke Danger on Jun 6, 2007 20:09:53 GMT -5
I still hope that Kim and Ron at one point finish them off... I'm guessin' you're a shoot now, ask questions later kinda person? When it is Impirials, the Zann Consortium, Sith, or Drakken and co., yeah, but otherwise, the other way around
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Post by Slyrr on Jun 6, 2007 20:26:07 GMT -5
He is Luke 'Danger'! Kinda like Kryten's alter-ego in "Red Dwarf". "The name's Jake - Jake Bullet." For my part, I took the comment as simply the natural desire for a villain team (like Team Probable) to get their come-uppance, rather than a slam against the characters themselves. Heck, all the major KP villains wind up in jail at some point. I don't think he meant that he dislikes the characters.
But in addition to the angst, there is stuff coming up that could be considered 'come-uppance'. At the least, they'll find the risks of being teen mercenaries catching up to them....
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Post by nabusan on Jun 6, 2007 20:42:46 GMT -5
OMG! You've seen Red Drawf?! I want Rimmer's holographic babies. ;D
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Post by Slyrr on Jun 6, 2007 20:53:55 GMT -5
I keep hearing rumors of a Red Dwarf movie, but they haven't even made another season yet. A great pity - soon the actors will be too 'old' for people to accept them in their roles. But Rimmer was the wingnut that held them all together
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Post by ViridianSin on Jun 6, 2007 21:48:08 GMT -5
These are really cool.
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Post by dracko19 on Jun 6, 2007 23:03:46 GMT -5
Quite impressive! feels "kp-like" even though its with original chars. Good job!
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Post by Luke Danger on Jun 7, 2007 14:59:07 GMT -5
He is Luke 'Danger'! Kinda like Kryten's alter-ego in "Red Dwarf". "The name's Jake - Jake Bullet." For my part, I took the comment as simply the natural desire for a villain team (like Team Probable) to get their come-uppance, rather than a slam against the characters themselves. Heck, all the major KP villains wind up in jail at some point. I don't think he meant that he dislikes the characters. But in addition to the angst, there is stuff coming up that could be considered 'come-uppance'. At the least, they'll find the risks of being teen mercenaries catching up to them.... I was refering to Luke Skywalker with this when I came up with it... never even heard about Red Dwarf...
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Post by Slyrr on Jun 19, 2007 22:56:12 GMT -5
Chapter 4 is up with it's associated drawings! View and review... home.comcast.net/~gregfisk/fatigable4.htmFor the illustrated chapter Things get more complicated when Team Probable's client Maze (pronounced 'mah-zay') appears, with some unexpected qualms.... Just like Kim has her Wade, Grimm has his Jade..... Age 9 - Rhonda thinks it's just a birthmark, but Chief Sakituya knows it's something more... As Team Probable and Maze enter the forest to begin their mission in earnest, a concerned Sakituya and Gentle Paw look on....
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