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Post by Slyrr on Aug 17, 2007 17:17:40 GMT -5
Glad you like it - Once you've read the chapter thoroughly, your thoughts on the narrative would be most welcome at fanfiction.net. (You don't need to register to review a story, though it won't be 'named'...)
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Post by nabusan on Aug 17, 2007 19:50:46 GMT -5
Chapter 6 is finally on line! home.comcast.net/~gregfisk/fatigable6.htmLinks to fanfiction.net: www.fanfiction.net/s/3546553/6/Back_To_KwitcherbeliakinReviews on this one are much appreciated - it's outside the box, with elements of the box still firmly in place..... Maze's true identity is revealed - Sskipoyiwa - the Shaman of Shadows! Grimm is posessed and helpless - and worse. His life is on the line, and Maze's shadow-medicine leaves Rhonda unable to help.... With no hope and no escape, Rhonda finally communes with the Great Bear Spirit, and learns the truth about the worst summer of her life.... It ain't easy being a Priestess of the Great Bear Spirit - but Rhonda's finally ready to step up... OMG, this totally made me think of the Avatar state: Your best pics so far, imo! It's scary how you top yourself with every piece of artwork you make!
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Post by ArtFan88 on Aug 17, 2007 23:16:24 GMT -5
Glad you like it - Once you've read the chapter thoroughly, your thoughts on the narrative would be most welcome at fanfiction.net. (You don't need to register to review a story, though it won't be 'named'...) I'll be sure to leave my thoughts. I already have an account, so no worries there.
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Post by Slyrr on Aug 18, 2007 9:00:27 GMT -5
It's light vrs. shadow in a fight for Grimm's life! Rhonda stepped up - but was it too late....?
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Post by nabusan on Aug 18, 2007 9:08:14 GMT -5
God, that's even more epic than the fight in Exchange!
Grimm has a nice tush ^^
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Post by Luke Danger on Aug 18, 2007 9:41:15 GMT -5
So one of Evil's best fighters is done for? I guess Evil just blew itself to hell.
Great artwork BTW.
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Post by Slyrr on Aug 18, 2007 10:21:58 GMT -5
Ha - you wish Katasistsikoowa takes her place as the new Bear Priestess. (Katasistsikoowa is Blackfoot for "Never Gets Tired" - a play on Rhonda Fatigable's name of 'indefatigable', which means 'untiring'....)More to come in chapter 7.... things aren't over yet!
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Post by Luke Danger on Aug 18, 2007 10:27:28 GMT -5
Aw man...
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Post by nabusan on Aug 18, 2007 17:19:22 GMT -5
Dude, quit thinkin' so black and white ^^ They have gray people too, y'know. ^^
And aww, Grimm's poor arm! Now he can't stop me from glomping him.
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Post by Luke Danger on Aug 18, 2007 17:21:38 GMT -5
If the glomps keep him out of action, go ahead...
seriously, I am thinking there will be a showdown between Kim, Ron, against Grimm and Rhonda. as in THE showdown, only one team walks away alive
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Post by Nutzkie on Aug 18, 2007 21:05:59 GMT -5
I am thinking there will be a showdown between Kim, Ron, against Grimm and Rhonda. as in THE showdown, only one team walks away alive I sort of doubt that Slyrr is gonna kill anyone off. He created these characters, after all... Why would he just turn around destroy them? I'm hoping for a Possible/Probable team-up of some sort, with Ron and Rhonda tag-teaming the bad guys. Think about it: Great Bear Spirit combining with Mystical Monkey Power... How hard would that rock?
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Post by Luke Danger on Aug 18, 2007 21:07:55 GMT -5
I am thinking there will be a showdown between Kim, Ron, against Grimm and Rhonda. as in THE showdown, only one team walks away alive I sort of doubt that Slyrr is gonna kill anyone off. He created these characters, after all... Why would he just turn around destroy them? I'm hoping for a Possible/Probable team-up of some sort, with Ron and Rhonda tag-teaming the bad guys. Think about it: Great Bear Spirit combining with Mystical Monkey Power... How hard would that rock? Well, I guess redemtion isn't to far fetched, it seems they were more mercs then real villians... though yea, a MMP and Bear whatever would be cool. Heh, you'd need a army of Mandalorians, a army of Jedi, and mabye a couple of Mon Calamari MC90 Star Cruisers to stop those two tag teamed
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Post by Slyrr on Aug 26, 2007 12:52:05 GMT -5
The conclusion/epilogue of "Back to Kwitcherbeliakin"! home.comcast.net/~gregfisk/fatigable7.htmQuoth Sakituya: "To give an old man the chance to soar like an eagle - I have rarely felt such wonder! Plus, I'm sure I looked cool...." Quoth Rhonda: "Will you please call him off? Listen pal, I swear I don't taste like berries..." By the pricking of his thumb, Ron knows that something wicked this way comes... There are two chosen ones now - and sooner or later, they're gonna have to face each other. And anyone who thinks Maze/Sskipoyiwa is just going to roll over and accept his defeat is like, so totally wrong... As always, reads/reviews are appreciated, as the comments/constructive critiques really stoke the ol' plot furnaces. And I'm gonna need to be firing on all cylinders for the next story, "All Things Probable 3". There's a number of things on tap now that the stage has been set which will make for a story that will (hopefully) be even more funny, angsty and engaging than "The Return of Zorpox". Hope everyone enjoyed this tale - now we can get back to the story being mostly about Kim and Ron like it's supposed to be. Slyrr
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Post by Luke Danger on Aug 26, 2007 12:55:10 GMT -5
Ron VS Rohnda? WHOO! Hold on, need to get some platinum peices for a bet... in the end, Ron's gonna pwn her though. And if you kill Kim OR Ron off, you'll have to watch your back for the rest of your RS.Net carrer... 'cause I'll be brining my Heroes from Guild Wars
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Post by Slyrr on Aug 26, 2007 12:58:05 GMT -5
Relax, anyone who has read the other stories knows I don't like to mess around much with established canon...
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Post by DanMat6288 on Aug 28, 2007 19:31:28 GMT -5
CHOSEN ONE! HA! I so called it! XD [does the "Danny so called it" dance]
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Post by nabusan on Aug 29, 2007 1:53:46 GMT -5
OMG! sequel! What a great end to a fab story!
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Post by DanMat6288 on Aug 30, 2007 11:17:49 GMT -5
[to Nabu, shaking him vigerously] WHERE, THE HECK, HAVE YOU BEEN!?!?!? [points to a certain question thread on the verge of being closed]
[to Slyrr] Anyway, if I said I were an Indy/Hana shipper, would you tip the Asylum for Mental Cartoon Lovers off on my location?
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Post by Slyrr on Aug 30, 2007 13:20:43 GMT -5
I admit when I made up Indy Fatigable, I didn't make the connection to Ron's sister's name of Hana and it being yet another pun Indy/Hana = Indiana (aka Indiana Jones). Though it's clever enough an accident that it's well worth mentioning in the next story - but infants are too young to ship
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