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Post by Slyrr on May 19, 2007 13:54:58 GMT -5
A stand-alone story featuring Team Probable - original character villains to Kim Possible and Ron Stoppable! This story answers the oft-asked question - what power does Rhonda Fatigable have to match Ron's Mystical Monkey Power? The tale starts off with Kim and Ron - shipping as we all want 'em to... Grimm must deal with the aftermath of "The Return of Zorpox..." And even bad guys can feel angst sometimes... Read and review over at fanfiction.net! www.fanfiction.net/s/3546553/1/Back_To_KwitcherbeliakinSlyrr
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Post by nabusan on May 19, 2007 15:39:02 GMT -5
They're...magnificent! I love the hug in the first pic, oooh Bonnie jealous? Grimm looks smokin' in his Avril top! And I love seeing the bad guys in Pre-K! I love the lighting of the last pic - it's like, speaking a thousand words.
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Post by Lord FunkyHoof on May 19, 2007 16:27:23 GMT -5
Lookin' good Slyrr!
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Post by nabusan on May 19, 2007 16:29:45 GMT -5
I love the little details, like pictures of Hego and that guy from Team Impossible being used as dart boards.
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Post by Slyrr on May 19, 2007 16:29:59 GMT -5
Thanks - I've been exercisin' And Rhonda learns they're going back to Kamp Kwitcherbeliakin - the scene of the worst summer of her life....
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Post by nabusan on May 19, 2007 16:31:52 GMT -5
Haha! It's so weird seeing a girl act so...Ron-ish! ;D
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Post by Rognik on May 19, 2007 17:31:50 GMT -5
He looks sinister even way back here. Nice use of the ying-yang logo, though. All we're missing are some mutant kids picking on Rhonda now.
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Post by Lord FunkyHoof on May 19, 2007 18:39:35 GMT -5
Oooohhhhh, Kwitcherbeliakin! Now I get it! Sorry, just had one of those 'Absent-Minded' moments...
Well, great work!
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Post by Rognik on May 19, 2007 19:06:43 GMT -5
Eh, that one took me a few reads before I got it, too. At least it was blatant enough that it WAS a pun like Wannaweep.
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Post by nabusan on May 19, 2007 22:02:11 GMT -5
I had to say it five times really fast before I got it ^^
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Post by erush1345 on May 19, 2007 22:43:22 GMT -5
He looks sinister even way back here. Nice use of the ying-yang logo, though. All we're missing are some mutant kids picking on Rhonda now. Actually, what we need is a bunch of do-gooder's harassing them, you know, the group's evil and stuff.
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Post by nabusan on May 19, 2007 22:45:53 GMT -5
Pixies!
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Post by slicknickshady on May 19, 2007 23:06:35 GMT -5
OMG that first pic is tAwesome!
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Post by Rocket on May 20, 2007 7:08:16 GMT -5
Î still don't get the Kwitcherbeliakin joke.
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Post by Slyrr on May 20, 2007 8:17:55 GMT -5
For those who don't quite get it, it's an old Indian word. The literal translation is "quit your belly aching". PS: It's not really an Indian word.....
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Post by Rocket on May 20, 2007 8:27:57 GMT -5
oh LOL, how could I not see that? Great artwork btw.
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Post by Rognik on May 20, 2007 11:48:36 GMT -5
For those who don't quite get it, it's an old Indian word. The literal translation is "quit your belly aching". it's Indian? I thought it would've been more like a Nahavo word, or Bronxian.
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Post by unferthidol on May 20, 2007 14:27:46 GMT -5
My favorite picture is the second one, I just really like the lighting, angle, and detail in it. Through you even bad guys can angst comment left me confused... bad guys are the best angsters out there. The first one is wonderfully atmospheric.
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Post by trombe on May 20, 2007 15:28:05 GMT -5
I just love the last pic with Rhonda.
Its so...hilariously cute!
Seriously.
If Kim has Ron, Grim needs his Rhonda.
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Post by Slyrr on May 26, 2007 15:59:07 GMT -5
Chapter 2 is online! Link at fanfiction.net: www.fanfiction.net/s/3546553/2/And the illustrated version: home.comcast.net/~gregfisk/fatigable2.htmFlashback to nine years old - Rhonda's first moments at Kamp Kwitcherbeliakin, in which she meets with Chief Sakituya, who runs the camp.... Another subtle pun of an old Indian name. It translates "Sock it to ya". P.S. - it's not really an Indian name.... )Quoth Grimm: "I don't believe this! I had the Fashionistas design these stupid outfits so we wouldn't look like them anymore!"And Grimm's answer to Kim's Pink Sloth - The Testoster-1! It's another pun - let's see who gets it....)Enjoy/comment!
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