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Post by buckmana on Mar 6, 2009 22:26:23 GMT -5
Very nice work Slyrr! I especially love Tara's "You're leaving us without a leader?" scene. And the scene with the Twisters shrine of Kim was too cute! I love this photo: I found it interesting that Grimm is playing "both ends against the middle". Although the situation is not clear, he could be using both villians and Government connections to further his own goals, whatever they may be........ I look forward to more stories and the conclusion to this one.
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Post by Slyrr on Mar 8, 2009 13:44:39 GMT -5
Thanks! Working on next chapter, but also understandably distracted because the 4th annual fannies will be starting soon over at fanfiction.net...
Grimm's 'dark purposes' will be revealed eventually (whatever those might be). Hopefully the next installment won't disappoint!
Side note: This story now has 10 pages here on this forum! Woo hoo! (Though I wonder if that puts people off.....)
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Post by Donne on Mar 8, 2009 21:11:00 GMT -5
Aw, that picture is cute! Great job, Slyrr!
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Post by itunesbabe on Mar 21, 2009 15:31:50 GMT -5
wow those are amazing! great job well done!
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Post by Slyrr on Mar 31, 2009 22:25:32 GMT -5
Man - I need to start making these chapters SHORTER.... Ch. 20 is up, along with 6 new drawings! home.comcast.net/~gregfisk/friendindark20.htm(quasi-illustrated) www.fanfiction.net/s/3785522/21/(fanfiction.net - read and review!) Kim Possible - welcome to Riddleton High! Say hello to Felicia - Rhonda's best girl friend - and Grimm's Cousin Mary! Ms. Darken - who can even keep Team Probable in check, and who gives Monique a last name Another riddle - how did Kim wind up leading the Riddleton Cheer squad? Comments/thoughts appreciated!
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Post by eoraptor on Mar 31, 2009 22:44:11 GMT -5
Is it okay to have impure thoughts about Ms. Darken?
otherwise *ahem* can't quite read the RHS sign, so I must be missing the joke, All good though.
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Post by Slyrr on Mar 31, 2009 22:46:13 GMT -5
Yeah, the text was a bit small, but it reads 'Cyprinidae - Alpha - 10 cents'. Now you must solve the riddle! The sign on the front of the school reads 'E Pluribus ' Yeah, what is it about the rigid schoolmarm that makes them so dang hot??
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Post by Twila Starla on Apr 1, 2009 1:00:28 GMT -5
Beautiful work, and props on the Riddler reference! LOL! ;D
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Post by pengychan on Apr 2, 2009 15:44:12 GMT -5
Those are great, as usual! Man, judging from these, the chapter has to be a blast! The characters are really well done, as usual (is it ever worth mentioning it each time? XD), and the OCs you created seem to be simply great. I especially love the pic with Kim glaring at Riddleton High (aw, the Riddler! XD) and the one with Ms. Darken, because she looks great XD Of course, I love the other pics too - I really like the perspective in the one with the cheer squad, and Felicia and Mary seem to be great characters too. Dang, now I can barely wait to read the chapter though it's pretty long and I don't have enough spare time to sit and read it right now I'll make sure to get the time this weekend. The time, and popcorn. Lots of popcorn XD
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Post by Slyrr on Apr 2, 2009 20:44:19 GMT -5
Thanks! Hope ye like it...
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Post by Donne on Apr 3, 2009 19:16:45 GMT -5
I've been falling behind reading-wise, but very nice artwork, Slyrr.
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Post by itunesbabe on Apr 4, 2009 9:07:07 GMT -5
i've just looked at all the fanfic art - i have to read this sometime - are the non kp characters your own creation or are they from another show?
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Post by erdrik on Apr 4, 2009 16:33:12 GMT -5
I like the art. There is room for improvement in some stages, but other stages are much better than I could do. For example in the pic of Kim cheering with the Riddleton squad, the blond on the right's neck seems a bit off. But I doubt I could do as good a job with the shading, coloring, backgrounds, and layout in general...
As for reading, Ive been holding off even starting because I don't like the appearent concept of The Probable Team. They are like evil mirror clones of Team Possible. And the recent reveal of Riddleton makes it seem worse as there is appearently an entire evil mirror clone of Middleton... Ive never really like "Evil Mirror Clones"... Is this truely the case with the story? I might give it a read if the characters at least have some unique qualities to them...
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Post by buckmana on Apr 4, 2009 23:22:45 GMT -5
Thanks for the next chapter.
Is it a bad sign that I got the reference about Mary's "universal promise"?
*gives Slyrr an mini energon cube*
It's finally to see how the Bonnie/Donnie sitch is creeping out Kim and Grim.
The scene with the clueless cheerleaders was sooo cute!
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Post by vampirenaomi on Apr 5, 2009 5:10:31 GMT -5
Wonderful work again! The illustrations really bring something unique to your stories. My favourite of the recent bunch is the picture with Monique and the fireflies. It was a wonderful scene.
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Post by Slyrr on Apr 5, 2009 10:23:35 GMT -5
The non-KP characters I made up, but as they're mostly 'opposites' to the KP characters, one could argue that I didn't make them up... It's kind of weird that way They do. The mere fact that all the genders are reversed is just one aspect. If you do make a start on them, then start at the beginning with the first story, "All Things Probable". home.comcast.net/~gregfisk/grimmprobable1.htmPoint well taken about the art - sometimes they don't turn out exactly the way I'd like, but I'm just too lazy to start over again But the art in the first story was my first effort, and therefore may have even more errors... But no, they're not 'evil clones' or alternate-universe evil versions. As Grimm said in the most recent chapter, 'We both live in the SAME universe Possible - you just seem to be having more trouble dealing with it.' Each character/opposite does have differences. While Ron has Mystical Monkey Power, Rhonda is a Priestess of the Great Bear Spirit. While Kim leads the Middleton cheer squad, Grimm does not lead the gymnastics team. There are other differences too, but it would take a long time to enumerate them. You'll just have to read and decide for yourself.... Not at all - I was worried NO one would get it! For best effect, view that picture while listening to Cascada's 'Ready for Love' at the part where she sings, 'Another boy, another life - another happy ending, and I'll be alive....'Thanks for the comments - already working on the next chapter!
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Post by darkwarrior on Apr 5, 2009 18:13:00 GMT -5
with people talking music, I can picture a soundtrack to this series.
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Post by erdrik on Apr 7, 2009 15:53:16 GMT -5
Chapter 5 of Back To Kwitcherbeliakin is missing the link to chapter 6.
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Post by Slyrr on Apr 7, 2009 17:38:03 GMT -5
Thanks - fixed
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Post by DanMat6288 on Apr 8, 2009 10:40:41 GMT -5
I think it's great that the sidekicks were finally able to relay a message to their friends at that Ron's message was sweet. Perhaps their's a message Grimm must learn before he can get through to the Great Bear. Now how's Kim gonna handle having to be a mercenary?
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