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Post by Ezbok58a on Jan 8, 2006 20:57:41 GMT -5
Ok, that was really good, and incredibly depressing at the same time. Dash it all!!!
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Post by taechunsa on Jan 8, 2006 21:41:44 GMT -5
Well, that was interesting. You guys sure seem to have Ron get knocked out easily.  I saw some similarities to The Fallen was that your doing? I am looking forward to what you have to present. |
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Post by Artificial Moose on Jan 8, 2006 21:45:47 GMT -5
I saw some similarities to The Fallen was that your doing? Nope, that was all G-Go. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Jan 8, 2006 21:59:32 GMT -5
Just a quick out of the blue question, one that I hope can knock me out of this crummy feeling I know have.
This is a K/R story right?
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Post by Artificial Moose on Jan 8, 2006 22:13:30 GMT -5
Just a quick out of the blue question, one that I hope can knock me out of this crummy feeling I know have. This is a K/R story right? I was going to be insufferably coy... but I won't. I'm not that evil... Yes. We are, for the most part, a bunch of hopeless romantics.  |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Jan 8, 2006 22:16:07 GMT -5
Sweet, now I need to read the fallen again. For some reason Darkness Within lead me to reading it again, thankfully its on my favorites list, and it will never leave it  |
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Post by surforst on Jan 8, 2006 23:16:46 GMT -5
Three different version of Gray and Wade having deja vu of being involved in missions. Now we know that Kim is the current Gray but she wasn't the previous two. I think I've finally got it! Though I may be wrong again I think I finally understand who Gray may be. The question is how and why. That I can't answer.
Anyway jerk Kim in this chapter and she's apparently going evil. Personally I doubt she's in full mental control here but as always I could be wrong. I've got a guess at what's going on but again I don't know how. Need more information and also I need a motive for why. After all if my theory is right it's really just a waste of money. Much easier ways of achieving victory.
As for proof (you people seem to like this thing called 'facts' after all) I got none ;D. Just my crazy guesses. Great chapter and looking forward to see if my theory is correct.
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Post by Ezbok58a on Jan 8, 2006 23:58:10 GMT -5
Hm, upon going over the chapter again this story is incredibly confusing. Either Gray is now Kim, or always has been Kim and the real Kim is locked away somewhere. My head hurts.
Drakken said it best "Who better to defeat Kim Possible than Kim Possible"
Army of Evil Kims?
Too many unanswered questions, But I am going with Surfrost on the Evil Kim thing.
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Post by zaratan on Jan 9, 2006 0:38:57 GMT -5
Yeah, G-Go's chapter 3 with a real shot to the gut, wasn't it. And to think, this is only the beginning! BWAHAHAHA!!!
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Post by surforst on Jan 9, 2006 2:37:16 GMT -5
Hm, upon going over the chapter again this story is incredibly confusing. Either Gray is now Kim, or always has been Kim and the real Kim is locked away somewhere. My head hurts. Drakken said it best "Who better to defeat Kim Possible than Kim Possible" Army of Evil Kims? Too many unanswered questions, But I am going with Surfrost on the Evil Kim thing. You got it all wrong my friend. The third Gray suited man is Kim but the other two are different people. Well I don't want to ruin it for everyone else but I think I figured out the secret. At least a part of it but for the life of me I can't figure out motive. If I'm right then the villains just plain got too much time on their hands and need to find a better hobby. Oh well. |
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Post by dragoonbigl on Jan 9, 2006 6:53:48 GMT -5
I can't read anymore...I'm serious. I didn't even review...It was that gut wrenching...the hopeless romantic side of me, the K/R side of me...too many stories where Kim totally destroys Ron. I've read way too many...getting weak...please...someone link me to some K/R smuff where they make babies all night long and live happily ever after...lol...
Seriously though...some rough stuff, its hard to read and I realy just didn't wanna review cause I didn't think I could do it without using all caps...too much for my heart...gotta go look at some goofmore fanart...that'll fix me right up...
yes I know...I use...the...elipse...way...too...much...LOL!
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Post by zaratan on Jan 9, 2006 11:12:02 GMT -5
Aww... now I feel a little bad. We played Squish the Rufus, and now people are scared. Well, I'll be nice. Some nice K/R smuff, just the thing to wipe those bad, ole images out of your head. www.fanfiction.net/s/2516888/1/This is not for the kiddies by the way. For the kiddies, we have this... www.fanfiction.net/s/2454290/1/Now see, us in the GWA aren't so bad. A bit of mattb smuff, and MrDrP's tender care, and you'll be better in no time. Well... until chapter 4! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! |
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Post by PossibleKim on Jan 9, 2006 12:44:01 GMT -5
Let just wait for the next story okay
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Post by fieryfalcon on Jan 9, 2006 16:54:36 GMT -5
Poor Ron, but he wasn't as devistated as I thought he would be. After the initial shock wore off he seemed to be in pretty good spirits, especially by the time he was going with Wade on a "solo" mission.
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Post by Ezbok58a on Jan 9, 2006 17:08:04 GMT -5
After having slept on that chapter, and it literally stuck with me throughout the night it was that hard hitting.
Ron IMO is taking all of this TOO WELL, not really like him, but then again we never really see him argue with Kim to begin with.
I predict that Ron is suddenly going to Realize that Kim is at the mercy of some of her inner demons that are only now lashing out and completely changing her. Ron's only hope at getting back the old Kim may be to fight the new Dark Kim and find a way to get her to spill.
I actually had a small scene pop into my head that involved a angry Ron confronting Gray after realizing it was Kim, subduing her with a GJ Taser gun, then grilling her mercilessly in a interogation room till she cracks.
Do you guys have the whole story planned out? Just asking because with this many good writers on this there has to be some story gaps (like what happened with G-Go and the editing of his chapter) Can't wait till the next chapter, I have faith that you all will have a great stategy for this to turn out alright.
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Post by zaratan on Jan 9, 2006 17:29:07 GMT -5
Oh, we have the story all planned out. The error was just in the months and timeline involved, which we hadn't discussed other then the course of events. The problem was, it was Christmas in chapter one, and that got buzzed over when G-Go was writing. A simple error to fix really. Had nothing to do with the overall plot, just in the deeper story telling. We also discuss after each chapter since, while we know the plot, we actually only read it ourselves when the one writing posts it, just to clarify points and go from there.
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Post by Ezbok58a on Jan 9, 2006 17:33:45 GMT -5
Ah, ok. I can see how something as little as that could happen, I can seriously say that I never really expected a twist like that. However I don't know why, as all authors involved with this have done a similar story themselves (not similar, but one involving many great twists like this one) So I really shouldn't have expected to be surprised like I was. Keep it Up.
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Post by campy on Jan 11, 2006 10:51:38 GMT -5
Aww... now I feel a little bad. We played Squish the Rufus, and now people are scared. Why be scared? G-Go was very canny at the end there: That clearly leaves the door open for the ongoing process (dying) to be interrupted in the next chapter. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Jan 11, 2006 16:45:33 GMT -5
Aww... now I feel a little bad. We played Squish the Rufus, and now people are scared. Why be scared? G-Go was very canny at the end there: That clearly leaves the door open for the ongoing process (dying) to be interrupted in the next chapter. Yes, cliffhanger endings rock with keeping people in suspense. Now with Moose writing the next chapt, I predict we are all going to be shocked again. (Both G-Go, and Moose wrote KP stories that could have gone bad for either Kim, Ron or Both. Remember the Fallen and REUNION?) Still, with this group of tallented writers on one story, it has to be good. |
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Post by aliciamartin on Jan 11, 2006 16:46:35 GMT -5
great story can't wait for more |
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