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Post by Dippy on Jun 29, 2007 16:43:24 GMT -5
Chapter thirteen and fourteen are up (or will be). Sarah isn't introduced until the end of chapter fourteen.
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Post by Nueva Paz on Jun 30, 2007 1:12:35 GMT -5
I just wanted to say that I love your fic. I just never know what to say for reviews.
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Post by Dippy on Jun 30, 2007 2:35:15 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Post by Dippy on Jul 1, 2007 13:08:07 GMT -5
Chapter fifteen has just been uploaded. Remember to leave any comments if you have suggestions or something to point out.
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Post by zoza on Jul 1, 2007 14:34:21 GMT -5
OK.
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Post by ArtsandCrafts on Jul 2, 2007 14:36:13 GMT -5
Dippy, you are evil.
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Post by Dippy on Jul 2, 2007 22:49:18 GMT -5
Oh? ;D
Why do you say that?
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Post by ArtsandCrafts on Jul 2, 2007 22:50:23 GMT -5
I could feel the awkwardness seeping out of my monitor when I read chapter fifteen.
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Post by Rocket on Jul 4, 2007 10:11:43 GMT -5
OMG! Great Fic! I hope you'll release the next chapter soon.
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Post by Dippy on Jul 8, 2007 5:25:51 GMT -5
Chapter 16 is up. You know the drill.
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Post by DarkFairyYume on Jul 14, 2007 4:02:33 GMT -5
LOL. I'm only on chapter nine, but I'm working on reading it. I'm actually reading it outloud to my little sister. I made her like KP. XDD But before I read anymore, I need to get you this info before I forget. x3 Name: Allison Rave Age: 20 Alias: DJ Stardust Skin: Pale Sexual Orientation: Straight Eyes: Pink (contacts) her natural eye color is green Hair: Black, with pink on the bottom Shirt: Pink and green stripes Shorts: Blue (main part), red (sides) Bracelet: Orange Belt: Yellow (star), green (belt) Boots: Purple Heart tattoo: Pink Powers: Uhh... well, I don't know yet. Maybe using techno music to control people? Kinda like mind control... xD I have no idea. Whatever you can think of.  Love the story so far. I'm gonna go back and read some more of it now. <333 |
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Post by Dippy on Jul 15, 2007 16:02:35 GMT -5
Got any ideas when it comes to her personality?
Anyway, chapter 17 has just been uploaded.
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Post by ArtsandCrafts on Jul 15, 2007 17:03:45 GMT -5
Wonderful job as always, Dippy.
I've promised you a cookie when you reach twenty chapters.
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Post by DarkFairyYume on Jul 18, 2007 23:45:01 GMT -5
Got any ideas when it comes to her personality? Anyway, chapter 17 has just been uploaded. I finally read up to chapter 16 (though for reading it outloud to my sister, I had to explain what a virgin is without scarring her fragile ten year old mind xD), and I absolutely LOVE it. I will review more thoroughly later, but I'm not going to be home for the next few days and I'm running out of time tonight (ugh I have a time limit at my grandma's). As for Alli's personality, she seems like a quiet and reserved girl, but she's really the opposite. She holds grudges, and will do her best to get revenge against a person and humiliate them in the worst way possible. She is very calculating too. Allison won't let her temper get the best of her, no, she'd wait for the person to be far out her sight, and then punch holes in the wall while deciding on when to slip ipetac in their drink. xD She's a little messed up in the head, but you wouldn't know it by looking at her. That's pretty much the best way I can describe her. ;D As far as introducing her to your story, Shego should drag Drakken out to a club, where Allison is DJing. Or something to that effect. I did write my own little chapter kinda following your story (though I didn't write in Sarah, I figured this would happen after they were rid of her or you could edit her in somehow), because I wanted to write a club scene in general. But it's your story and I wanna see how you put my character in, so ignore that. x) Anyhoo, with what little time I have left, I am off to ff.net to read that next chapter!! *poofs* |
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Post by Dippy on Jul 22, 2007 19:49:03 GMT -5
She'll actually be introduced in the sequel.
I've just uploaded chapter 18 of "Taking a break".
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Post by Firelady Nemo on Jul 23, 2007 16:19:28 GMT -5
I read this on fanfiction.com & i really like it! Good work!
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Post by DarkFairyYume on Jul 25, 2007 23:20:07 GMT -5
I finally reviewed it. ;3
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Post by Dippy on Jul 26, 2007 11:27:05 GMT -5
I've just uploaded chapter nineteen. You all know what to do.
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Post by ArtsandCrafts on Jul 26, 2007 12:43:02 GMT -5
I reviewed. Frankly, I'm running out of compliments.
You never did tell me which type of cookie was your favourite.
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Post by Dippy on Jul 26, 2007 12:59:46 GMT -5
Thanks for the review. and don't worry. i'm not looking for compliments. just thoughts about the chapther. Good or bad.
And yes, unlike Drakken Shego is jeallin'.
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