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Post by Dippy on Aug 3, 2007 9:33:33 GMT -5
Chapter 21 is up. It's a long one. Read & Review.
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Aug 3, 2007 11:51:17 GMT -5
Chapter 21 is up. It's a long one. Read & Review. This chapter was kind of a satisfying D/S read. ;D Let's see what happens next... PS: I liked the parts about why Drakken likes karaoke. |
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Post by shegofanatic on Aug 6, 2007 15:35:14 GMT -5
I love this story! Always excited when a new chapter is up
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Post by mego on Aug 6, 2007 15:35:58 GMT -5
Chapter 21 is up. It's a long one. Read & Review. I'll review it but you can't make me read it!  |
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Post by Dippy on Aug 6, 2007 15:42:42 GMT -5
Wow. Thanks people. I always appreciate kind words.
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Post by ArtsandCrafts on Aug 6, 2007 16:08:28 GMT -5
This is probably one of my favourite D/S stories ever.
By the way Dippy, you never did tell me what your favourite flavour of cookie is.
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Post by Dippy on Aug 6, 2007 18:52:40 GMT -5
I haven't actually. I haven't seen any of the epsisodes from season 4. Chapter twenty is uploading and I have to say I'm quite proud of it. I'll take that cookie now Artsandcrafts. Chocolate chip please. |
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Aug 6, 2007 19:00:08 GMT -5
...now where's that orgy you promised me?
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Post by Rocket on Aug 6, 2007 19:01:48 GMT -5
...now where's that orgy you promised me? o___O I don't even want to know what you're talking about.. |
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Post by mego on Aug 7, 2007 12:36:54 GMT -5
"We're super villians, Shego. Robbing banks is just petty."
Hilarious.
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Post by Dippy on Aug 11, 2007 10:02:11 GMT -5
Just added the 22nd chapter. Now get'a readin'!
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Post by DarkFairyYume on Aug 12, 2007 22:32:25 GMT -5
I read it but I couldn't review!! FF.net is being lame!!
I actually feel so bad for Shego and Drakken. She's so wrapped up in trying to be who she is and trying to be what she thinks Drakken wants her to be, while Drakken is just plain confused. I don't blame him. xD;; Great chapter, short, but great. :33
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Post by CJS: The Last Fender Bender on Aug 17, 2007 21:35:29 GMT -5
I finally felt like reading something, and I must say I was pleased. A lot of fanfics turn me off when the characters involved aren't developed or if their presented without depth. What you have done with Drakken and Shego is a refreshing change of pace from what I've read in other fanfics, especially with regard to Drakken.
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Post by Dippy on Aug 20, 2007 20:47:14 GMT -5
I read it but I couldn't review!! FF.net is being lame!! I actually feel so bad for Shego and Drakken. She's so wrapped up in trying to be who she is and trying to be what she thinks Drakken wants her to be, while Drakken is just plain confused. I don't blame him. xD;; Great chapter, short, but great. :33 I keep my chapters short so I don't end up turning readers off with the share amount of text. Instead I try updating as often as I can. I finally felt like reading something, and I must say I was pleased. A lot of fanfics turn me off when the characters involved aren't developed or if their presented without depth. What you have done with Drakken and Shego is a refreshing change of pace from what I've read in other fanfics, especially with regard to Drakken. Why thank you. Anyway, I just uploaded chapter 24. Go check it out if you feel like it. |
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Aug 20, 2007 20:54:03 GMT -5
Nice chappy, I left you a review.  You might want to consider giving your text a bit more breathing room, though. It's a bit of a strain on the eyes at times. |
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Post by DarkFairyYume on Aug 20, 2007 23:02:22 GMT -5
I read it but I couldn't review!! FF.net is being lame!! I actually feel so bad for Shego and Drakken. She's so wrapped up in trying to be who she is and trying to be what she thinks Drakken wants her to be, while Drakken is just plain confused. I don't blame him. xD;; Great chapter, short, but great. :33 I keep my chapters short so I don't end up turning readers off with the share amount of text. Instead I try updating as often as I can. Oh, I know what you mean, I used to do the same when I wrote fanfics... but I hate having to wait! xDD |
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Post by mego on Aug 21, 2007 0:37:27 GMT -5
Anyway, I just uploaded chapter 24. Go check it out if you feel like it. Liar! You uploaded Chapter 23. |
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Post by Firelady Nemo on Aug 26, 2007 16:00:02 GMT -5
oh! i liked this story!!!  |
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Aug 28, 2007 11:53:45 GMT -5
*nags for update*
God bedring igjen. ;D
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Post by aliciamartin on Aug 30, 2007 10:07:55 GMT -5
yaghhhhhhh you updated i love your story i can't wait to read the next chapter can't wait for more ;D
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