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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 21, 2005 15:05:54 GMT -5
Then I have failed you,  well the story did change from my original path I set for it, but I think it changed for the better. Chapter 10 coming soon. |
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Post by trollis on Oct 21, 2005 15:11:14 GMT -5
I might have to read it a couple more times do get the anwsers.  MvH Anders "Trollis"Bernhardsson |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 21, 2005 15:19:02 GMT -5
Don't worry about it, As long as you enjoyed it that is all that matters  |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 23, 2005 1:41:36 GMT -5
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Post by trollis on Oct 23, 2005 2:37:47 GMT -5
OMG that last chapter is so good.  I nerver really like Mankey, now I hate him. Keep up the good work. MvH Anders "Trollis" Bernhardsson |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 23, 2005 12:24:09 GMT -5
Things get better, well worse actually but thats not the point.
Chapter 11 will be up by wed. or thur. just a FYI
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Post by trollis on Oct 23, 2005 14:36:13 GMT -5
I am looking forward to it MvH Anders "Trollis" Bernhardsson |
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Post by taechunsa on Oct 25, 2005 0:30:33 GMT -5
I am going to go back and reread the whole thing as soon as I get a chance and send my comments.
This last chapter was better, but still had a few problems.
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 25, 2005 18:24:10 GMT -5
When you do post them here.
No point in hiding it, and I'm not offended by them as long as they give out good information.
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 26, 2005 21:47:27 GMT -5
Might be a little longer on chapter 11 guys, I got alot on my plate as of now.
Don't worry though, it will still be up this week...............At some point.
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Post by taechunsa on Oct 27, 2005 0:50:05 GMT -5
Don't rush it. Take your time, we will still be here.
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Post by jmt2005791 on Oct 27, 2005 1:09:10 GMT -5
i'm sorry but i can't read anymore of your story my dad and grandfather both served during wars and i'm approaching the one year aniversery of their deaths november 3 for my dad and november 14 for my grandfather i liked the story of what i read but i just can read anymore again i'm sorry
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 27, 2005 16:38:11 GMT -5
No need to apologize jmt5887,
It will still be here if you ever want to finish reading it.
BTW Everything is cleared up so CH. 11 should be debuting some time tonight.
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 28, 2005 17:44:17 GMT -5
Ok, Major writters block on chapter 11 so its going to be a little longer. It is also going to be a really bad chapter (not going so well in planning this one) So bear with that when it finally gets up.
Plus, I am starting another new KP fanfic. This new one is a crossover with a late 70s Horror Movie called "The Car" Figured it would make a interesting horror flick as Halloween is coming up.
The Sooner I can clear my head of all these conflicting stories, the better, because one is just sucking the resources from the others.
Ah the joys of writting Fanfiction
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 28, 2005 18:51:31 GMT -5
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Post by Artificial Moose on Oct 28, 2005 18:52:46 GMT -5
The Sooner I can clear my head of all these conflicting stories, the better, because one is just sucking the resources from the others. Ah the joys of writting Fanfiction Prioritize, man! Force the other stories to shut up and wait their turn. I feel your pain on this, dude. Really and truly. If all else fails, just have your stories engage in "pistols at sun up" till one earns your full attention ;D. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 28, 2005 19:45:29 GMT -5
It's really hard to do I've got three stories fighting for the top spot, although the best solution I found was to get the one story started and get that as far as I could, then with that out of the way I focus more on the next one and so on. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 29, 2005 20:45:07 GMT -5
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Post by trollis on Oct 30, 2005 13:26:25 GMT -5
Really good one Keep up the good work MvH Anders "Trollis" Bernhardsson |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 2, 2005 22:47:46 GMT -5
Didn't forget about you guys here on the page of War! (yes, thats what I'm calling it)
Caught up in the runaway success of the car comes to middleton, which, while waiting for ideas to come to me I advise you read as this one is now officially stumped.
Dialoge between Shego, Drakken and the Squad was not on my list of things to cover and now that its here I wrote myself into a corner.
Until I have some Ideas come to me for at least the 1st part of the next chapter, pass the time with "he Car Comes to Middleton" cause this might take a while.
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