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Post by trollis on Nov 3, 2005 18:52:16 GMT -5
I know that sitch, I am stuck with my own. Just take your time I will wait here. MvH Anders "Trollis" Bernhardsson
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 3, 2005 21:10:48 GMT -5
I'm gonna start on it now, hopefully I can finish it in one sitting as once I start, I don't stop.
Here goes nothing.
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Post by captainkodak1 on Nov 3, 2005 22:36:15 GMT -5
Go for it dude.
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 4, 2005 2:05:19 GMT -5
Thanks Captain! I said I would do it in one sitting and what do you know? Sure its 2:04AM by Chapter 13 is done!! www.fanfiction.net/s/2607139/13/One final chapter and its all over folks! I thank everyone who read it and such More formal thanks will be handed out at the end of the last chapter. Can't believe I made it this far
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 11, 2005 23:26:48 GMT -5
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Post by taechunsa on Nov 12, 2005 10:57:25 GMT -5
Ezbok,
Very good. I am sorry about not getting back to you with these edits yet. School is a killer right now. I will hopefully have more time after Thanksgiving. I will try to get with you back on it then.
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Post by trollis on Nov 12, 2005 12:14:56 GMT -5
That was a really good story, hope that my will be half that good. Keep up the good work
MvH Anders "Trollis" Bernhardsson
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 12, 2005 19:48:52 GMT -5
Trollis, I have faith that your story will be just as good if not better than mine.
Now that its done, I've had someone comment on there on all the inaccuracies I have in it (Including the misspelling of Da Nang :0 )
taechunsa, don't worry bout it. Luckily this quarter classes are a little easier, which allowed for me to get the stories done (well this one done, The Car started).
BTW taechunsa, when you get a chance (this goes for you two trollis) check out my Movie crossover fanfic, The Car comes to Middleton.
I only say that because I believe I am the only one who actually tried a crossover like this, and so far it looks like its going very well, so your opinions on it are valued, when you get the chance. Good luck, and Thanks guys!!
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Post by surforst on Nov 13, 2005 15:02:27 GMT -5
Well first time for me to post here instead of fanfiction. Again good end but that review your mentioning...I actually agreed with it. Sorry But then again I'm not one to focus on facts either. The story did what it had to and thats all that matters. Would have liked to see Ron go all crazed monkey power at the end but hey thats just me.
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 13, 2005 15:23:48 GMT -5
So you are the same surforst! Welcome aboard!!!
Don't worry I agreed with what he said too. But My goal was to place both Kim and Ron into a enviroment in which they had never experienced, with all the activities that our soldiers had to do to stay alive.
I had no political out look while writting this and the research was basically nonexistant (exccept for the medals, those were real medals).
I just enjoyed writting it out, and facts be damned! Thats why I'm doing the KP/Car crossover which will have a unexpected sequel.
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Post by surforst on Nov 13, 2005 15:35:42 GMT -5
So you are the same surforst! Welcome aboard!!! I just enjoyed writting it out, and facts be darned! Thats why I'm doing the KP/Car crossover which will have a unexpected sequel. Your going to turn the car good? Yep thats me ;D I decided to join after using this site for basic research into Kim and Ron personality. Yes I'm that crazy
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 13, 2005 16:27:32 GMT -5
We're all a little crazy here, we have to be to worship this show this much.
No the Car is not turning good, but it will not be destroyed in the story (Damaged yes, not destroyed).
When I finish up the Car story, I'll start on the sequel with a preview at the end of the story to let the audience know about it.
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Post by trollis on Nov 13, 2005 17:46:30 GMT -5
Trollis, I have faith that your story will be just as good if not better than mine. I got 3 chapters but none of them is done just a few lines here and there , it will take long time before I post anything here. MvH Anders "Trollis" Bernhardsson
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 13, 2005 17:51:46 GMT -5
It'll come, a war story especially takes a long time just to get it to feel authentic, I know it did for me.
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