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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Jun 30, 2007 19:58:30 GMT -5
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Post by ArtsandCrafts on Jun 30, 2007 20:04:39 GMT -5
You've finally uploaded it, thank you.
Now, let's see what you've done...
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Post by metaljudas on Jun 30, 2007 20:39:28 GMT -5
I left an Oh-So-Useful review at FF.net, but I'll admit I just have to say that I enjoyed it. Good job.
By the way... I have been meaning to ask you. Who are the two comic characters in your signature? They are the only ones I don't recognize. The ones with the man with glasses and the white-haired woman with the 'Shazam' hear rings.
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Jun 30, 2007 20:47:14 GMT -5
That's Henry 'Beast' McCoy and Ororo 'Storm' Munroe from Ultimate X-Men. They're teenagers/young adults in this universe, and they were an item.
By the way, about your review-- I adore it when authors do off-camera stuff in fanfics! I mean, that's basically the very essence of fanfics, isn't it? Trying to imagine what we don't get to see? It must've been how the very first fanfic got started, anyway.
Well...that and 'what if'-scenarios, but I'm a sucker for off-camera.
Thanks for your review.
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Post by metaljudas on Jun 30, 2007 21:31:20 GMT -5
No wonder I didn't recognize Doctor McCoy. He looks more like Clark Kent there.
Thinking about the origins of fanfic would give me a nightmare. Anyway, yeah. Backstage fics are small ways an author can show how he or she perceives episode or scenes.
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Post by zoza on Jun 30, 2007 21:43:51 GMT -5
I remember Maslow's hierchy of needs. *Goes to read* I'll leave you a review on ff.net.
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Post by ArtsandCrafts on Jun 30, 2007 22:15:32 GMT -5
Very good, but where are the other fifty-nine pages?
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Post by zoza on Jun 30, 2007 22:41:45 GMT -5
Fifty-nine? *Rubs hands in anticipation*
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Post by ArtsandCrafts on Jun 30, 2007 22:48:41 GMT -5
Well, I'm not certain.
Ninnik did say that she was writing a "sixty page fanfic" at one point.
Although I'm fairly sure she was exadurating.
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Post by Nueva Paz on Jun 30, 2007 23:28:19 GMT -5
Okay, ff.net is being stupid and telling me I need to wait 30 seconds before leaving another review. Even though I didn't leave any others today. I'll try again later...
edit: Okay, it worked now. I hope my review doesn't end up showing up three times.
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Jul 1, 2007 0:03:08 GMT -5
No wonder I didn't recognize Doctor McCoy. He looks more like Clark Kent there. Thinking about the origins of fanfic would give me a nightmare. Anyway, yeah. Backstage fics are small ways an author can show how he or she perceives episode or scenes. AAAHHHH! Clark Kent? Don't say that! ...you're kinda right, though. ;D
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Jul 1, 2007 0:05:53 GMT -5
Well, I'm not certain. Ninnik did say that she was writing a "sixty page fanfic" at one point. Although I'm fairly sure she was exadurating. Sadly, no, I'm not exaggerating. I just went and counted. It's about 110 pages now, actually, and the chapters aren't even remotely done yet. This is my curse. I always write too much. Oh well... Nueva Paz: BTW, I did this thing entirely deliberately: I can see how it might look annoying, however. I wasn't sure if people were gonna get it or not. It's an old narrative joke. Maybe a kind of tired one.
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Post by Nueva Paz on Jul 1, 2007 0:20:50 GMT -5
I guess it didn't strike me that way. Maybe it's because it just doesn't really fit in with your writing style throughout the rest of the story. Then again, maybe it's just me. Other people might have different opinions.
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Jul 1, 2007 0:42:32 GMT -5
I guess it didn't strike me that way. Maybe it's because it just doesn't really fit in with your writing style throughout the rest of the story. Then again, maybe it's just me. Other people might have different opinions. Hmmm...yeah. Maybe I should change it. EDIT: I've changed it.
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Post by littlemissruthie on Jul 1, 2007 0:49:53 GMT -5
I have to read it!
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Post by Dippy on Jul 1, 2007 2:52:13 GMT -5
I'm going to read it as well, when I can. I already like how it starts.
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Post by ogehsim on Jul 1, 2007 21:34:28 GMT -5
ff.net is being wierd on me and won't let me log in so... I enjoyed this story. Immensely so actually. And I laughed at the double "unreasonable" thing. I wouldn't change it.
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Jul 1, 2007 23:52:42 GMT -5
Unfortunately, I changed it already, and now I'm uncertain about it.
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Post by DarkFairyYume on Jul 7, 2007 22:24:57 GMT -5
I really like this story a lot. And I added you to my favorite authors list. ;3
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Post by Dippy on Jul 7, 2007 22:49:20 GMT -5
*shameles plug* Have you read mine? ... ;D
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